You know when it’s getting late in the day and nothing will come and you open and the strangest things come through. Today is one of those days. Here is my strange thing. I think it’s a poem. It has alliteration and a kind of rhythm to it, and prose poems are very forgiving in terms of rules. I have no idea what it’s about. I sort of like that. It headed off in about 5 different directions and I let it go.
Spectre
The peonies I picked for the kitchen have already fallen apart. I reached to touch their velvet pink and the petals fell into my hand like pieces ready for a baby’s quilt. Last night I hung my paintings in this new house. I purchased new hardware because what I thought I had was in hiding. I could hear the house holding its breath as I hammered the nails into its walls, the red dragon with matt scales and garlic breath tapping her talons on the wood floor, giving suggestions on placement and skew. Everything is new here. I woke to the smell of onion soup when there was none and lost the last vestiges of a dream where I was flying. Out of the mist which was/was not there rose a vision moving like motion itself, smooth as becalmed water, her pearl teeth gathered from the oysters’ pain, her skirts like a pink sky at morning. In the desert, this could not happen. Dreams would bask in the sun as saguaro stood in silent praise of the day. I have searched everywhere, and still I cannot find you.
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Rita – thank you! Must be a modern dance. 🙂
Jackie: I was talking about communal dreaming in my class (I wrote it into something) and one of the other writers wrote about communal writing – how people who write together start hitting the same ideas/subjects. Fascinating isn’t it?!
I don’t know either……but it would make a great beginning to a novel. Luscious words, as always.
You know I don’t read your posts until I’ve finished mine for the day so I don’t copy any part of “you” into my work. But time and again I find we are thinking along similar lines, certainly different words and voice but similarities such as you say here “the petals fell into my hand like pieces ready for a baby’s quilt” and when you read my “oh so short” poem on my blog for May 22 you’ll see what I mean.
Loved this! Just sounds like something great is going to happen next.
I don’t know what it means, either, but the words flowed like a dance. 🙂